Mr.Fahrenheit Page 3

Mr.Fahrenheit Page 3

Austin’s Notes: In the original synopsis of this page (Mr. Rainwater and I were experimenting with different styles of writing and so dropped the typical scripting routine we do), Mr. Fahrenheit was supposed to comment on how Ned was NOT trespassing and that this was, in fact, OK. The more astute readers among you will notice that this is a reference to a certain Freddie Mercury song; the more astute readers among you will also notice, as Mr. Rainwater did, that that line is impossibly clumsy as a bit of dialogue. Thank god for his editor’s eye and the final change.

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